A Free Sample

I’ve been away for a bit because I’m

1.  Producing a Play– it’s in L.A. now and goes to New York in the fall.

2.  Launching my new online course  –  We’re in the groove!

3.  Trying to be a decent mother to my kids — Went to see Star Trek last night.  Recommend!

Here’a free sample of the course.  Today’s lesson in the lusty month of May:  TEMPTATION

As we discussed last week, Lust is one of the Seven Deadly Sins.  It’s a biological imperative to ensure the survival of the species.   All human beings experience this basic human drive, therefore, your main character will experience this basic human drive.  From time to time, all human beings give in to temptation.  Therefore, your main character will at one point or another in the story, give in to temptation (either sexual or otherwise.) 

Write a scene in which your main character struggles with, then gives in to, temptation.

To find out more about the course:  http://theartofstory.com/

Enjoy!

Comments (2)

Harvey MendezJuly 21st, 2009 at 6:36 am

TEMPTATION
Outside the bedroom window, a pair of large eyes on a hairy face with saliva dripping from its fangs, a man-wolf watched the young woman. The werewolf uttered a low growl. He yearned for a mate. Allison sat on her bed and combed her long blonde hair. Rolf, the wolf man, crept closer to her window. She started undressing, laid her clothes on a chair, and slipped into a silk nightie. Rolf salivated at her lithe shape, clawed the earth beneath his feet. His growls grew louder. Allison turned toward the noise, stared into his anxious eyes. She screamed as he burst into her bedroom.

Kate KosianowskiJuly 29th, 2009 at 1:50 pm

Alex met “the fish” at a late night disco in the Hamptons, she was a petite, jewish girl( his father’s faith), and put him at ease.” Last dance”, Donna Sommers hit of the season was playing and he knew if he was going to make a move now was the time. His dark bedroom eyes caught her attention, despite his large size , that scorpio gaze took her in and once Alex looked into your soul , one knew they were safe in his arms. They danced and touched,laughed and finished the bottle of Dom Piegon, when he invited her home. She wispered in his ear, touching his thick dark hair. ” Malcolm ” the limo driver watched as she seduced him in the back seat through his mirror as Alex gave into fufilling the fantasy of a one night stand. little did he know once she slept in the master suite of “the castle”, she stayed for four years. Be careful what you wish for!!!!

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